#9200909, By sunjumper National Novel Writing Month 2012

  • sunjumper 3 Dec 2012 23:38:45 3,378 posts
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    TechnoHippy wrote:

    I somehow missed this earlier.

    Chapter 10:

    "The shift of attitude was to late though of saving him" - 'to' should be 'too'

    "After the while the buzz isníT good "

    "Would you mind joying us?" - joying?

    Nice, it all came together at the end.
    Oh... Feedback! Om nom nom.
    Thank you.

    And 'joying' someone should totally be a verb.

    I dream of the day when the auto-correct features will gain a semblance of A.I. able to ask me if silly things like that are really what I wanted to write...

    Metalfish lives!!! o_O

    Edited by sunjumper at 23:39:17 03-12-2012
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