#9220220, By TechnoHippy National Novel Writing Month 2012

  • TechnoHippy 11 Dec 2012 19:05:37 14,707 posts
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    Overtime 3:

    Is 'shuteye ' one word?

    I've been curious about a full assess since it's mention in the last story.

    "Tests can be wrong. Much easier to believe you're a liar." - Nice and cold.

    "he’d had to ‘improvise’ by mixing a little salt into boiling water, letting it cool and using this home-made saline to make up the volume lost." - Does that really work? I suppose it should.

    Another good chapter - as with Blerk don't keep us waiting for more :-)
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