Many thanks for the feedback.
Gettng back into the story is incredibly hard. I spent almost two and half hours for measly 1300ish words and as it is the grand tradition I hate most of it and I feel like I lost the feeling of the original story.
I wanted to write more before I publish the next bit, but then I remembered that this is the month of writing and not the month of worrying.
So here is the beginning of the new
chapter. I have some strong reservations about how this is going but then pushing it out into the wild will give me some feedback that will either make me calm down or give me some pointers of how to proceed.
#12329131, By sunjumper NaNoWriMo 2018
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