Today was a busy day, I hardly got any writing done, but I will have a look at your stuff tomorrow. i'm looking forward to it.
Thank you for oyur kind and instructive feedback. I am very glad to hear that the chapter that was such a pain to write doesn't show it. And I'm glad you liked the cook.
There should have been an update today as for the moment I know pretty well where the story is moving towards. But I hope that I can get that done tomorrow. I'm still hoping for one of those magic 'flow' days.
Oberrvation of the week everything that has happened from chapter 2 onwards was ignored in the original draft, last year chapter two would have started with the generator installed and running for the first time. But this time I thought that I am in no hurry and I could as well show how everyone came together in the first place.
#12332455, By sunjumper NaNoWriMo 2018
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