#12333392, By BearFishPie NaNoWriMo 2018

  • BearFishPie 9 Nov 2018 17:47:33 650 posts
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    @sunjumper thanks very much for the feedback - greatly appreciated! My plan was for it to be enough of a refresh of the core mechanics of Andy’s ability and hint to the prior book’s occurrences without stopping the story dead on the first page. Unfortunately Chapter 2 is a car wreck in text form, and I’ll have to effectively rewrite it from scratch :(
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