Carbon_Altered wrote:You know what they say: 'A real genius steals.'
Thank you for the feedback as always it helps a lot and as you can see feedback can also shape the way a story unfolds.
While I'm still unhappy with chapter 8, chapter 9 is shaping up much better, which reminds me that I should be writing...
And Chapter 9 is done. It is very short not quite 1k, it is more of an intermission but I think it should stand alone. I wish I could have written more today. But I am happy with the result. (although I suspect that it is full of half dead sentences, I really need to sleep more)
Edited by sunjumper at 01:06:47 15-11-2018
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