What you say about the story makes perfect sense and you succeed perfectly in achieving what you set out to do. You nail the Lovecraftian vibe while having your own distinct voice and while the story is pretty much a classic story in the vein of “The Call of Cuthulhu” or “At the Mountains of Madness” it has its own clean voice. That is really good work especially as it does not feel like a simple rip-off or remix.
I have not read the new chapter but I’m very much looking forward to see how it unfolds.
#12338083, By sunjumper NaNoWriMo 2018
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