800 words for a best man speech? You really know what hungry people want! As long as they were put on the page with care you did a good job.
Thank you for your feedback, yours and that of Carbon show that I am actually getting better in my writing and that when I have the feeling that something is good other people do actually agree with me. That is actually very encouraging.
And here's Chapter 11. I'm finally getting everyone in place and it looks like I get to reach 'plot-twist' point in the not so distant future.
#12340234, By sunjumper NaNoWriMo 2018
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