This one is a bit hit and miss again.|
And I think I am getting close to character overkill here as more and more people keep appearing. There is at least one main character that needs to be introduced and because of a plot development there are some more people who also need to enter the story. This kind of works with the type of story this is but I realise that his is turning into a bit of a mess. I do hope it is a lovable mess though.
Edited by sunjumper at 01:36:49 23-11-2018
#12341457, By sunjumper NaNoWriMo 2018
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