Thank you for your feedback as always.
It is always good to hear your opinion on the text.
The story is meant to be more on the indulgent side, but as I changed the way I tell the story it has become unbalanced in the strangest way. The café is a safe place where people with their troubles will find a moment of peace. Now howver I'm still telling the 'origin' story of the place and just having it being remotely plausible is based on tons of people being nice and/or the protagonists having the devil's luck.
Ah well, the story is still running along though and despite it being slightly unspectacular (in my opinion) it has not stalled yet.
#12343972, By sunjumper NaNoWriMo 2018
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